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The Lost Heir of The Land of Whirlpools Ch 3

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The Lost Heir of the Land of Whirlpools

Naruto: Oh Boy, this chapter is going to be amazing

DragonStorm: You seem too happy about this

Naruto: Yeah, I get my new ability in this chapter right?

DragonStorm: Yep, Naruto mind doing the disclaimer

Naruto: Sure, DragonStorm doesn't own Pokemon or Naruto. Believe it! Hey how is that poll about the Legendary Pokemon going?

DragonStorm: Oh, the poll is over. You are getting the Phoenix Pokemon called Ho-oh and the three beasts; Raikou "The Roar of Thunder", Eneti "The Eruption of Volcano" and Suicune "The Spirit of the North Wind"

Naruto: Alright, so what does Hinata-chan get?

DragonStorm: Oh, She gets the Beast of the Sea (Lugia) along with the titans of fire (Moltres), ice (Articuno) and lighting (Zapdos)

Naruto: Awesome, We get to summon some really powerful Uzu Kemono

DragonStorm: Naruto, that's for later on in the story

Naruto: okay, since we're done; Let this chapter begins, Dattebayo!?

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Chapter 3: The Fox's Story

Naruto's Mindscape

Naruto woke up in the sewer-like settings of his mind, "Hey what I'm doing here" said Naruto as he got up on his two feet.

Once on his feet, Naruto heard his tenant arguing with something or someone. Naruto began to walk over where the Kyuubi was sealed into.

When he arrived to the sealed cage of the Kyuubi, he spotted a small brown fox barking at the Naruto's tenant, the all powerful Kyuubi, who is kept in sealed cage by the fourth Hokage.

"I AM NOT YOUR GRANDPA!?" roared the Kyuubi

"Yes you are" yipped the fox kit

"No I am not. Now Leave before I shred you into little bits" roared the gigantic fox

"Yes, you are, my mom told me about you" said the fox kit

"Hey, what's going on here" interrupted Naruto as walked up to the cage

"This annoying kit appeared out of nowhere and started saying that I'm related to him" explained the Kyuubi

The brown kit jumped onto Naruto's head, and then said "I'm not a fox kit, I'm an Uzu Kemono like you"

Naruto and the Kyuubi were shocked by what the Uzu Kemono kit spoke; "Hold on, are you saying that the Kyuubi is an Uzu Kemono like you and the Squirtle that Urahaha-senei summoned earlier" summarized Naruto

"Yes child, I'm an Uzu Kemono like the annoying Eevee that is sitting on top of your head. I already know that we were banished from Konoha, so I have decided even if we go to your families' homeland; we start on new terms" spoke the Powerful Uzu Kemono

"Huh? What do you mean by new terms?" asked Naruto

"I mean that we start our relationship anew because I once lived in the Land of Whirlpools before that damn Uchiha kidnapped me and defeat my only friend with that cursed sharingan" explained Kyuubi

"I guess we both hate the same thing, the sharingan; Granny told me that the majority of the council worships Sasuke's eyes mainly the civilian council" commented Naruto as the Eevee and The Kyuubi nodded in agreement

"Since we both hate those annoying eyes, I have to say this I approve of the Hyuuga girl of being your girlfriend; the byakugan is something I favor than the Sharingan. Also, I'll going to tell you my name" said Kyuubi

"Thanks, but I thought your name is Kyuubi" questioned Naruto

"You humans assume that's my name, my true name is Kurama. The only humans that know my name is Mito Uzumaki, the wife of the 1st Hokage; and Kushina Uzumaki, your mother" answered Kurama

Naruto was surprised that Kurama, the legendary Kyuubi that attacked Konoha on his birthday, was sealed in his own mother, "My mom had you?" said the surprised Blonde

"Yes, and she was second keeper of the Kyuubi. Also it was the same Uchiha that kidnapped and placed me under his controlled; that attacked your parents to get to me and forcing me to attack your old village thirteen years ago, but I'm getting ahead of myself" explained the Kyuubi Uzu Kemono

"So you're going to tell me the whole story about you being an Uzu Kemono" assumed Naruto, instead two of Kurama's tails tapped the foreheads of Naruto and the Eevee.

Images flashed of black fox with golden rings talking to what appeared to be a space goat and the legendary Sage of the Six Paths along with several other Uzu Kemono like a classy cat, an ape with fire on its head and a deer with autumn colored leaves on its antlers. Then it showed Kurama relaxing with a gigantic golem while looking over Uzu, the hidden whirlpool village.

Shortly after, the same gigantic golem and Kurama attacked an Uchiha outside of the village; unfortunately the golem was knocked out and Kurama was hypnotized by the Uchiha. Next, was series of image showing the fight between the Uchiha from earlier and the 1st Hokage.

Afterwards Kurama lifted his tails from their heads, "Now you know a little something about me, Naruto and rest of the story can be looked in the Uzumaki clan archives" said Kurama

"Wow I was right, you're my grandpa" said Eevee

"In a way, yes I'm your grandfather" answered Kurama

"Kurama, if you knew my mother that means you know who my dad is" stated Naruto

"If you want to know about your parents, asked the leader of the Uzu when you get there" answered Kurama

"Maybe my uncle might know who my father is?" said Naruto

"Or the blonde man, but anyway time to send you both back, your girlfriend is waiting for you and your Uzu Kemono partners to get up" said Kurama

"Partner?" said Naruto with a confused look on his face.

"I can explain, Uzu Kemono summoners like you are able to have one or two Uzu Kemono as a partners like the Inuzuka clan uses dogs expect we Uzu Kemono are made up of over 600 different species of wildlife. Since I'm here that makes me your partner, my name is Shirubaateeru or Shiru for short and love playing pranks" answered Shiru

"Nice to meet Shiru, I think we're going to great friends; but Kurama you said partners, mind telling me?" replied Naruto

"Shiru is a possible descendent of mine, and is able to enter your mindscape. Outside while you rest, Shiru and your second partner is sleeping with you until you get up" explained Kurama

Before Naruto could say another word; Naruto was sent back to real world

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Real World

Naruto felt something causing him to feel good for a strange reason. His eyes began to slowly open, to see a field of indigo blue hair and then hear some giggling nearby. Naruto turned his head and saw Shiru and next to a blue-green reptile and a green markings on it's body with a green bud on it's back giggling at him

"Eevee Eve" Shiru yipped

"Bulbasaur Bulba" cried the blue canine

"So I only understand you, whenever we talk to Kurama" retort Naruto as he felt Hinata held Naruto tighter causing the blonde to blush a bit.

Shiru leaped on top of Naruto's head and tapped his one of his front paws on his forehead

'Kurama-jiji told me if you wanted to talk, you and I just have to make physical contact like me staying on top of your head or our fingers touch. Also, this a Bulbasaur a grass affinity Uzu Kemono and his name is Tsubomi' said Shiru through their mind link up

'Cool, can Tsubomi do the same thing like you?' asked Naruto

'Sorry, no he can't' replied Shiru, Naruto nodded as Shiru leaped off and land next to Tsubomi.

Hinata began to swift herself around Naruto and then let out a tiny yawn, which Naruto it was very cute. She began to open her lavender eyes slowly and then quickly shot open as she realized that she was on Naruto and blush heavy red.

"Naruto-kun, I'm sorry if I did anything embarrassing" said Hinata with her head down in shame

"It's okay, Hinata-chan; you were just worried for me since last night after Kisuke-sensei did" replied Naruto as he held her hand to comfort her

"Alright Naruto-kun" said Hinata, and then she notice that Naruto's hair was different and a brown fox kit and a blue-green reptile watching them

"Uh Naruto-kun, do you know why your hair is reddish-yellow and what those animals are" asked Hinata

"Oh, those are my Uzu Kemono, Shiru an Eevee" said Naruto as Shiru cried "Eevee"

"And this is Tsubomi, a Bulbasaur. I think my hair is different from the seal, I guess I was a red-head to start with" finished Naruto as Tsubomi nodded

Then Koyuki and her Aipom came into where Hinata and Naruto were at, "Naruto nii-san, Hinata, Sensei and nee-san need help; they're fighting some masked ANBU that sensei say they're from ROOT" said Koyuki

"Hinata, they could be after Kurama" said Naruto as he got up

Hinata noticed the lack of 'chan' and felt something serious was going to happen, anthem asked "Naruto-kun, who's Kurama?"

"The Kyuubi's name" replied Naruto as he and Hinata along with Shiru and Tsubomi went to help out to join the fight

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Meanwhile outside of the cave

Kisuke and Erza were fighting against a group of ROOT ANBU very well despite that they were over numbered by the number of ROOT nin that were there.

"Now tell me, why are you here?" asked Kisuke as he tossed a ROOT Nin to the ground

"Our master went the Kyuubi boy, so he can be the ext Hokage" explained the ROOT Nin

"Really, well too bad, we were assigned to protect my nephew" replied Kisuke as he made a fast combination of hand signs and then said "And we're not going to let you have him, UZU KEMONO KUCHIYOSE NO JUTSU"

Kisuke slammed his hand on to the ground and puff of smoke appeared, and then cleared revealing Polar Bear with an icicle bear wearing a forehead protector around his right arm with it bearing the Uzumaki clan's symbol

"Ah Beartic, it's good to see you" said Kisuke as he fanned himself

"Beartic Bear Beartic" growled the Polar Bear Uzu Kemono

"Right, we talk about the old times later. We need to stop these ROOT shinobi from getting to Naruto and his girlfriend" commented Kisuke as he went to continued to fight the Root shinobi along with Beartic after sealing the Root shinobi into the scroll.

As for Naruto's cousin Erza, she literature murdering them as they to attack her and her Uzu Kemono partner, "Houndler, Demon Pulse No Jutsu" ordered Erza as she slashed a Root member, Houndler howled at the sky as the dark purple charka gathered around him, and them roared a wave of Kill Intent and the dark chakra attacked towards the ROOT Members that were attacking Erza and Houndler.

Erza began to make some hand signs and then slammed her fist into the ground "Magma released: Heatmor trap no jutsu" and then the grass began to burn into nothing and the ground suddenly started to boil and turn into lava.

Erza, Houndler and the ROOT Shinobi army were on a field of boiling hot magma.

The ROOT Shinobi were feeling the burning heat from the magma that surrounded them, one of started to charge at them as the magma started to engulf the ROOT member whole. The Shinobi cried in pain as the magma dissolved him.

"We have to retreat and inform Lord Danzo that we couldn't obtain the Kyuubi" said a female ROOT Shinobi

"Fine, ROOT retreat" said the leader of the Root Group as the remaining Root forces fled.

"That was close" said Kisuke as he and Beartic came by after Erza sealing the shinobi she captured and leaped out of the lava pit

"Too close, they were after Naruto; right?" commented Erza

"Yes, I have a feeling that Danzo wanted Naruto to be captured after being exiled from Konoha and use him as a weapon" stated Kisuke

"Sensei, we have to get Naruto and Hinata to our village before they decide to counter strike" said Erza as Koyuki, Naruto and Hinata appeared with Naruto's Uzu Kemono partner as well

"Kisuke-sensei, what happened?" asked Koyuki

"Some ROOT Shinobi tried to captured Naruto for the Kyuubi" answered Erza

"I know that the Prevy-sage told me the Akatsuki were after me but they decide to rest for about 3 years before I left, so who else is after me?" commented Naruto

"The Leader of ROOT, Danzo; He wants the Kyuubi so he can make you into a weapon in hopes he would become Hokage" answered Kisuke

"Danzo; who is he?" asked Naruto

"Naruto-kun, I have heard of him; my father told me about him before I went to join up with you. Danzo is a man that goes against the 3rd Hokage's ways of learning, and he would do anything to become Hokage and ruin the Will of Fire" explained Hinata

"Now we better get going to Uzu before anything else happens" said Kisuke

"Hai" said everyone else with a nod, and began to the hidden Whirlpool village.

A few hours on the road towards Uzushiokagure, the group decided to stop for a bit of rest and something to eat. After everyone had finished dinner, Kisuke wanted to talk to Naruto privately away from the girls.

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Away from the girls.

Once alone, Kisuke and Naruto were deep into the woods and away from the girls. "Here is a good spot" said Kisuke

Naruto was a bit confused why did Kisuke wanted to talk to Naruto privately, and then asked "Kisuke-sensei, why are we out here?"

"Naruto, there's something I have to tell you. It's about your family" answered Kisuke

"I already know that my mom had the fox and that she and my father sealed Kurama in me probably they hated me" stated Naruto knowing a little bit about his mother

"Yes that is a bit true, but they had no other choice to do so and no, they loved you. Heck me and your uncle watch them count the days for you and your sister to be born" commented Kisuke

"Wait, I have a sister!?" cried the shocked Naruto because he was happy that his parents wanted him, and he just learned that he has a sister

"Yep, you and Hinata can meet her when we get to Uzu. Now onto an important matter" said Kisuke as he got down on his knee and bowed his head with his hat off showing his wildly blonde hair

"Naruto, I want to ask for your forgiveness because of my lack appearance in your life as your uncle" said Kisuke as he waited for Naruto's decision

'Wait, he's my uncle. Does what Kurama mean by "Or the blonde man" when we chatting earlier. Well I guess I could forgive him since he came to help me and Hinata and he does feel sorry for not being in my life until now' thought the young blonde boy for while and then spoke "Uncle Kisuke, I decide to forgive you, but in return I want to know about my father"

Kisuke got up and place his hat back on, "Alright deal, Naruto; your father was none other than the 4th Hokage, Minato Namikaze and my real name is Kisuke Urahara Namikaze, his older brother. We both were orphans of second Shinobi war, I lost my parent to the war; I'm not sure about Minato, I was only 3 when he came to orphanage as a baby. During our time there, we developed a brotherly bond. When Minato was adopted, he asked if I was able to come with him and our adoptive mother accepted his request" said Kisuke as he told Naruto all about his father and his uncle.

After Kisuke was done with his story, Naruto was dumbfounded by all the things that his father was and began to torture his uncle with them as they went back to came; "Uncle, how come Kakashi-sensei or Prevy-Sage never told me about my dad?"

"Well they might have waiting until the right time to tell you" replied Kisuke

"Alright, so my parent's planned to restore Uzushinokagure after I was born and wanted you and Uncle Ryu to go ahead and start the project, right?"

"Yeah, when we heard about the attack; we stopped everything and went back to Konoha. The old man told us that you, Kushina and Minato died, but your sister was alive; and me being her godfather and uncle, I wanted her to come with to Uzu as we worked on it and he allowed that your sister would come with us"

"Hold on, if the old man told you about my sister being alive but not me. So how did you learned that I was alive?" asked Naruto

"Well Jiraiya, the one you call Prevy Sage told us about you being alive after the news of the Chunin Exams invasion. We were surprised, I knew why the 3rd keep you from us mainly because the village's safety; but Ryu wanted to finish the work of Orochimaru until Akene managed to stop him since her love for her parent affection for the village and it couldn't helped that she looked like Kushina when she was 13" explained Kisuke

"Okay, so what after that?" asked Naruto wanting to know where was this going

"We made a plan that Jiraiya would bring you to our village during your 3 year training, and afterward Akene would return with you to Konoha. Now since you were banished, we changed our plans and the only ones that know about it besides me and your uncle are Jiraiya, Tsunade and Shizune" answered Kisuke as the two of them go closer to the others

"Now it's my turn to asked you some questions; I noticed that you have activated your Uzu Kemono summoning bloodline" said Kisuke "Don't worry, it wouldn't affect your contract with the toads. You know your father had a pact with them as well, I remember the time that me, Minato, and Kushina would a several rounds of sake with the chief toad" finished Kisuke

"Yeah, It's a good thing that the toads won't mind; and these is Shirubaateeru or Shiru for short an Eevee and Tsubomi, a Bulbasaur" commented Naruto as the two of them reached camp and saw the girl already asleep.

"Uncle Kisuke, how far are from the village?" asked Naruto

"Don't worry, we'll be there tomorrow; I just to make sure we get there without a problem. I just want you and the girls to get some sleep" said Kisuke as they went to get some rest for the night.

Kisuke slept in a nearby tree, while Naruto decided to sleep next to Hinata. Kisuke slept in a nearby tree, while Naruto decided to sleep next to Hinata. The next morning, the camp where our heroes were resting was brightening by the sunlight as the sun rose in the sky.

Naruto found himself facing Hinata as she was still asleep, 'Wow, Hinata-chan is really beautiful when she's asleep' thought Naruto as his face began to blush as he continued to watch his girlfriend sleep.

Until a certain brown kit interrupted; 'You must really like her maybe you should ask her to be your mate' said Shiru in their mind-link while he sat on top of Naruto's shoulder

'Mate?' replied Naruto

'I mean a girlfriend or wife in human terms' stated Shiru

'I'm not sure; even she told she loves me. Maybe we should take it slow' replied Naruto

'Hm not a bad plan, boss; is it okay to call you boss?' asked Shiru

'Sure, Konohamaru always called me that; it reminds about Konoha' answered Naruto as Hinata began to wake up and rubbed her eyes

"Morning Naruto-kun" said Hinata as she and Naruto both got off the ground while Shiru leaped off Naruto's shoulder onto the ground.

"Hi Hinata-chan" replied Naruto as stretched his arms in the air. Tsubomi and Shiru cried to get Hinata's attention

"Good morning to the both of you" said Hinata as she petted the kitsune and bud based Uzu Kemono on their heads

Kisuke, Erza and Koyuki were already having breakfast of recently hunted wild boar. Erza's Uzu Kemono partner Houndler was chewing on leg bone of the hog.

Shiru quietly crept up to the pork that Houndler was eating and managed to steal piece without the larger Uzu Kemono and shared it with Tsubomi, but didn't eat it instead eat some wild fruits and berries.

After everyone had breakfast, our heroes began the final lap towards Uzushiokagure, The village hidden in the Whirlpools; Naruto and Hinata's new home.

Soon something very eventful will happen that will change our blonde hero and indigo heroine lives forever.

END OF CHAPTER

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Author's Note: This took me a while since I'm working on some other stories like "Monster Tamers", "Sonic Generations (DragonStorm Edition)", "Sister Swap", and "Black Destiny White Hope" (Which will go on hiatus after Chapter 2 until I personally play Pokemon Black 2) and this one.

Note: 9/20/2012- This chapter was edited do I goof-up I made from the original draft, Naruto's partner were supposed to be Bulbasaur and Eevee, not Riolu and Eevee.

So what will happen to Naruto and Hinata next chapter?

Words to know

Shirubaateeru- Silvertail

Tsubomi- Bud

Akene- Red
Here is Chapter 3 of "The Lost Heir"

This took me a while since I'm working on some other stories like "Monster Tamers", "Sonic Generations (DragonStorm Edition)", “Sister Swap”, and "Black Destiny White Hope" (Which will go on hiatus after Chapter 2 until I personally play Pokemon Black 2) and this one.
So what will happen to Naruto and Hinata next chapter?

Update: I realized a goof-up from the original draft, Naruto was supposed to get an Eevee and a Bulbasaur as his partners.

Words to know
Shirubaateeru- Silvertail
Tsubomi- Bud
Akene- Red
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